RaIix's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dimension Jumper]

Tell me one thing - did you personally win all the levels you designed? If so, then I wonder how did you manage to fit in those 8 hours. ;)
Just one thing I found quite annoying - the level restarts when you touch the left side of a tile. Sometimes you don't even fall down, but the screen suddenly fades. Maybe it's intentional, but still...

I know it's meant to be impossible, but there should be at least hard/easy mode (or 2-3 easier levels), or some not-very-tireless players will rage-quit soon and give you bad rating.
Congratulations on your first game. ;)

[Flash Action Script Tut]

I don't think you get the concept of actually "teaching" something. These are not "how to make..." tutorials, these are just "how I made...".
Using this guide, I got quite good at pressing F8 and F9, but you should at least explain the code you want us to copy & paste. Yes, somebody who knows at least a bit of programming can partially understand it, but since you call it "tutorial" and not "try this", it should be explained to some level.
And btw, the third lesson's code is quite strangely displayed.

[DEAD CITY RPG]

Not very special story, MS Paint graphics, the hero looks like an orange crab when walking... Well, it can suprise sometimes, few animations made me grin, but it can't save everything.
Try improving the models (you won't really frighten many people with blood made with paint bucket tool) and (just my personal opinion) in fact the music you use doesn't need to be in every single horror.

[Nooball Adventure V0.2]

1) Since it's ball, it should roll, not rub against the surface. And sometimes it falls even though it should have stayed on the spot.
2) Music?
3) Why do we need to click on next level every time you win a previous one?
4) More levels?

But it's quite nice game with neat graphics.

Akizutsu responds:

It's just the V0.2 I will put music and more levels, thanks for the idea :)

[Staircases And Slides]

You have few good ideas, but the main problem is that the graphics and animations are not very fluent, worked-through - that's what may (and probably will) drive players away.
Personally, I found annoying that even if you want to play a single-player game, you have to control the computer as well (it's a nice joke in the menu, but quite a drawback later) - is it really that hard to make 1-6 random number generator? The dice animation could also be improved, because no matter what you get on the dice, it always shows "5".

I am sorry for the low rating, but the game needs more work.

ZabuJard responds:

well the game is skill based so i dont know what else to say, what a alucky guy! thx 4 the review

[Trans Atlantic Flight]

The main problem - it is far more probable that you run out of fuel, than that you crash into a bird or fall off the screen. Either make the fuel go down at a slower rate or make sure that the fuel power-ups appear regularly. Maybe the best solution is to make them refill your fuel completely.

The game would overall be more attractive if you added another danger (e.g. storm cloud/mountain, which must be flew round), just a new factor which can't be met directly at the start.

Then, the cursor is doubled (at least for me) and you should have an option to return to the main menu, not just to Retry game and Upload score.

Aside from that, it's a funny game with neat graphics.

[Stick Dive]

Few tips:
1) Make an image for swimming diagonally up/down, it will look more fluent.
2) We are able to swim outside the screen, which would results in an infinite score, if we had the time to wait
3) Both the diver and the objects can be outside of the water
4) Improve the background, a simple color gradient can make the water 100% better
5) Some objects (including the diver) don't dissapear after the game is over

[Balls Brothers]

The difficulty does not increase during time, you should add a new aspect from time to time (e.g. ice in the cave levels).

[Salem]

Great game, impressive graphics and voice-acting, good story (including the prologues at the start of each chapter), the personality of both the main heroes was really worked through. The only drawback I could find in the whole game is that the first boss is the hardest one to beat. ;)
Maybe the movement speed is also quite low, but anyway - awesome game.

[Derp till Dawn]

My Little Pony + Slenderman? Really? ;) Funny concept.

I think that there's space for improvement with the 3rd person view at the start (because it's not very scary), maybe you should add something to mildly cross the screen from time to time or make the battery's energy limited, so we'd have to turn it off from time to time.
Then, in the house, it gets 100% better, the sudden change of the view is perfect and... no spoilers for the others.

I played through the game twice and I think it's good and the absurd combination just adds the chery on top. Well done.